Children should be controlled or should they be allowed to take their own decision. Discuss both view and give your Opinion.
It is debatable whether
kids
should be allowed to make their own Use synonyms
decisions
. Some believe that, By letting Use synonyms
children
think and make Use synonyms
decisions
of their own will benefit their development and help them mature more quickly while others think that until Use synonyms
children
reach their legal’s age, Use synonyms
parents
must make Use synonyms
decisions
for them. Whereas both opinions have their own merits and I partly agree with both of them to a certain extent. I will describe both views and express my opinion about Use synonyms
this
topic in the following paragraphs.
Those who support the idea that we should let Linking Words
children
think and make life choices of their own, believe that doing so will help foster a more healthy environment for young Use synonyms
adults
. They will not feel scared to learn new things make mistakes and whenever something wrong happens, they will feel responsible for their actions and eventually try to find a way to resolve it on their own without having to wait for their Use synonyms
parents
. It will help them grow independently from their Use synonyms
parents
and mature quickly. Use synonyms
For example
, ever since I was a child, my mother let me and my older make Linking Words
decisions
on our own terms, beginning with whether when we want to play or study. Which school we want to go to, which subject we like to study and whether we want to take extra classes. Which career path we want to pursue and eventually what kind of jobs we want to have. By doing Use synonyms
this
, we feel more confident in our own Linking Words
decisions
and do not feel like we depend on our Use synonyms
parents
for everything.
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On the other hand
, those who believe that Linking Words
parents
should make Use synonyms
decisions
for their Use synonyms
children
Use synonyms
also
have decent reasons to do so. Linking Words
Children
, especially those who started to become adolescents. Regardless of the fact that younger generations these days are smart, mature quickly, and full of confidence. There are still certain areas in which they can have less judgment compared to Use synonyms
adults
. It is possible that they can receive negative influences from media or social networks which are full of awful people who might want to exploit Use synonyms
kids
for their own benefit. Use synonyms
For example
, there have been a lot of cases where Linking Words
adults
took advantage of Use synonyms
kids
, sexually by exploiting the fact that they were still innocent in Use synonyms
this
regard. Despite that, Linking Words
Parents
should not forbid their Use synonyms
kids
to make a choice of their own but still should take good care of their Use synonyms
kids
and make Use synonyms
decisions
for them when need to.
In conclusion, allowing Use synonyms
children
to think and make a decision is absolutely necessary for Use synonyms
children
’s mental development. Use synonyms
However
, there will still be certain situations in which Linking Words
children
will need support from Use synonyms
adults
. It is possible for Use synonyms
parents
to allow Use synonyms
children
to have freedom while still looking after and protecting them at the same time.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite