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More and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. What are reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

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As technology progresses, so many
people
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 opt out of the traditional way of reading paper
books
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 and go for something more convenient like electronic
books
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instead
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. Despite having its disadvantages. It provides more benefits for lots of
people
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,
students
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 and scholars
in particular
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. The following paragraphs will elaborate more on
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 topic. While reading paper
books
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 can sometimes give readers feel like they reading actual
books
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 and can provide more sense of possessions for those who own them. Reading e-
books
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 can be preferable by a lot of folks since it is more suitable for the modern lifestyle of today. Readers can have
access
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 to any book at any time. Especially for college
students
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, whereas in the past student had to carry heavy textbooks with them or go to the
library
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 to
access
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 these resources. For now,
students
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 can
access
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 these pieces of knowledge at any time with just the tip of their fingers and e-
books
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 became the more favourable method of reading
books
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 by most
students
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, As can be seen from the trend of electronics tablets are quickly becoming the default electronic devices that college
students
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 need to buy. Because of the aforementioned, there is less and less appeal for
people
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 to go to the
library
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 to get
access
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 to these resources. Especially when there are a lot of uncontrollable factors when using public libraries like the crowd, noise, and limited space which can be bothersome for some
people
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.
Moreover
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,
books
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 in public libraries can be misplaced and take time and effort to find.
Also
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, there is a chance that
people
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 can be denied
access
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 to those
books
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 due to high demand and the limited amount of them for each
library
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. The introduction of ebooks adds more reason for
people
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 not to go to the
library
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. In conclusion, with the new technology which provides us with alternatives for the traditional libraries at the expense of losing an old way of living, the governments must make necessary changes to the existing methods to align with the newer technology.
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