Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is accurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid growth of technology, the world has come a long way .nowadays the
internet
has become an integral part of our lives. We can't imagine a day without the
internet
. There is no denying the fact that the
internet
become the main source of getting information and knowledge. With the help of the
internet
, we don't just read the news but
also
participate to spread the news . The assertion seems quite a controversial issue across the globe. It has been universally acknowledged that the problem related to fake information on social media is escalating at an alarming rate in the current scenario. Whether to agree or not it's a tough-provoking question. As far as I can see it is more justified to agree with the statement. In
further
paragraphs,I will not only shed light on the issue but
also
elaborate on my point of view regarding
this
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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