People think teenage years are the happiest time of their lives while others argue that adult life is the happiest despite greater responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Individuals have their own points in
life
when they were the happiest. While one may argue that teenage years are preferably more full of enjoyment, opponents argue that adult life
is more jubilant despite greater responsibility. As for me, I suppose teenagers have better times in life
due to the freedom that comes with their age, while adults are faced with an image of society made up of how their lives should be.
On the one hand, it is not to be neglected that being an adult has its own advantages in pursuing happiness too. Once you have reached a certain age, members of society are allowed and capable of making their own choices. Consequently
, individuals now have the privilege to live their lives: the ability to live alone, work at a dream job, and earn money for their own hard work. For example
, one of my neighbourhood friends is over thirty and she can decide what she wants to be in her life
by herself without depending on anyone.
On the other hand
, being a teenager comes with its own privileges. This
is the time
in one’s life
called the transition phase. It is a time
when a teen is shifting from childhood to adulthood, a time
in which he or she is allowed to make mistakes and learn from them and a time
when you can freely experience life
as it is without any pressure from his or her boss giving them deadlines they ought to finish by Monday. Moreover
, the teenage years are when they get to hang out with their friends; growing up, meeting up with friends became a once-in-a-year thing, with everyone prioritizing their jobs. For instance
, as I am a teenager, even if I make mistakes, I can get away from responsibilities and I can enjoy my teenage life
without any burdens which I would not be able to do when I become older.
To conclude, the happiest point in life
depends on each individual and their life
choices, but as for me, I love the beauty of being a teenager. It’s a time
in life
when individuals are allowed to make mistakes and learn from them. A point in life
where one’s not faced with the pressure of money or how to support your family.Submitted by tr.zarwaihnin on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite