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Preparing for an English exam online is more effective than preparing in the traditional school. Agree or disagree?

#english #exam #school
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It is considered that
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learning
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learning
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 online for tests
are
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 far better than learning it in
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school.
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 I
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understand
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understand
 online education is becoming common and popular for many people, I do not think educating online is as
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 as teaching in
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class.
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 essay will argue that learning face-to-face is better than doing it online and explain the reasons.
Firstly
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,
students
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better concentration in
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school than from devices.
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Althogh
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 there are loads of benefits of online learning, in my view, the
students
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 can get distracted by many things
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 as their bed, TV, and noises around them. It will
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effect
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their
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their
 focus.
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, when they learn with other people, they can not get distracted because there are other
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 around them.
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, the learners will be inspired by other
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classmates
.
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, when you are in a class, you can compare your process with your
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friends
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 and discuss
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 them.
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 can boost your motivation. I highly believe that learning from other peers is highly important for
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exams
. In conclusion, As the
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educations
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 more in real life and they can discuss with their peers in the class, I believe learning in person is
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 more effective to learn compared to learning online.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

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