Write about the following topic: Of late, it is believed that students studying in secondary school and high school should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this argument? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Money
plays a pivotal role in everybody's Use synonyms
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. Some communities say that students who are pursuing secondary Use synonyms
education
and high studies should learn the skill to manage Use synonyms
money
because it is one of the important Use synonyms
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skills to save Use synonyms
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in their Use synonyms
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. I strongly agree with the given statement. Use synonyms
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, In Linking Words
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essay, I will discuss some reasons according to my opinion and Linking Words
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I will give some relevant examples.
On the one side, Communities who are studying in secondary schools and higher schools are adults who have the maturity to understand situations and problems. If the Linking Words
education
system provides them with knowledge by teaching them how to manage their Use synonyms
money
based on their requirements Use synonyms
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they will learn some important skills to balance their Linking Words
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with savings. In some countries, the Use synonyms
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system teaches students about savings and balancing their Use synonyms
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with work and family. Use synonyms
For instance
, My brother went to abroad study in the USA, where they will be taught about how to save their incomes and Linking Words
also
provide part-time jobs in their college to meet their basic needs.
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Secondly
, In my view, secondary school students have some idea about their Linking Words
career
and their financial status so by teaching them about managing Use synonyms
money
in their Use synonyms
life
it will be useful to them to support their family based on their financial status. Use synonyms
For instance
, My friend has great knowledge of managing Linking Words
money
because she always wants to help her parents by using the Use synonyms
money
for necessary things and Use synonyms
also
on her birthday she doesn't waste Linking Words
money
on eating fast food but she brings homemade healthy food for all of my friends.
To sum up, In my view is the optimum way to teach about managing Use synonyms
money
in secondary schools. The government and Use synonyms
Education
system should look after Use synonyms
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course about managing Linking Words
money
because Use synonyms
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will help communities to lead balanced Linking Words
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without financial problems in their Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite