Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Individuals believe that the administration should encourage to healthy society's well-being, while others say that an individual's
health
is only their own priority and not the authority responsible for it. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides. On the one hand, healthy
life
is a crucial role in human existence and The
government
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involvement
for
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people
's well-being is
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significant part of its society. implementing new laws and regulations for food consumption and quality has several benefits for future
health
. Whereby, it would help to reduce
health
issues. Nowadays lots of
people
have
health
problems
such
as obesity, cholesterol and diabetes etc. The reason is that they consume toxic food and contained highly adverse ingredients.
people
do not know about it, that's why the
government
should involve and solve
this
problem.
For instance
, in Mexico, the
government
enforce regulation on younger children's food consumption, highly sugary foods
prohibited
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to
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consumption
for
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children and package lebal on sugar levels.
As a result
, It would aid certainly improve their healthy
life
.
On the other hand
, governments can not tackle these obstacles without individual help individually
people
should take action for their own well-being. Because
people
can control their own behaviours. I strongly believe
people
can take care of their own
life
, not governments responsible for their
life
.
For instance
, research shows, that
people
who have been diagnosed with diabetes have excessive favourites for sweet foods. Preparing only healthy meals can reduce
health
issues. Whereby,
people
can see prominent
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their
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life
. In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic,
people
believe that the
government
should improve
people
's
health
,
although
others say individuals' well-being
their
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own priority.
However
, I believe that
individually
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people
only can maintain their own
life
.
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