Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Amanda, I hope you are doing well! I am extremely happy that

finally

, you have decided to learn to drive a car. I must tell you how important it is these days. You can go anywhere in your car in all types of weather.

Also

, you can take your 2 years old daughter along with you in her car seat.

Moreover

, when you get your driving license you will realize that you can use that as proof of residence at most places.

Firstly

, you should enrol yourself in driving classes and I know one lady driver who has a driving school, you can give my reference there. I am sure you are going to get a good benefit from that. In fact, you'

feel comfortable learning from her. She is very polite and experienced too. In my opinion, now as you have decided to drive so I'

suggest you do a lot of practice before coming on the road. You can do practice in the grain market and nearby big parking spaces. You'

get some confidence if you drive

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these places. All the best, I hope you'

find my suggestions good and helpful. Regards Shikha

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