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"These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary school. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?"

#countries #people #teachers #school
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recent years, we have noticed that
less
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 people are interested to become
teachers
,
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 in
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secondary school. The main reason justifying
this
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,
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 is the behaviour of
students
 which we will elaborate
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 discuss and propose some solutions to
this
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 issue. Teaching is
a an
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 admirable job which requires
patient
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, skills and love for
children
. Unfortunately, many people's interest in
this
 particular job is diminishing mainly because of student's behaviours.
Children
 at school are conducting themselves very badly and
teachers
 are having difficulties
to control
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 these young people.
Such
 behaviours are due to the tolerance of
parents
 today at home.
Parents
 are not guiding their
children
 with
disciplines
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 and
no
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 more imposing strict regulations. So, many
children
 tend to act deliberately,
consequently
, their conducts are absolutely out of control.
Similarly
, other reasons leading to the bad behaviour of
children
 is that they are exposed to violence, sex and inappropriate videos which are not suitable for their age.
Moreover
, many teenagers are influenced by peer groups and drugs, which eventually
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 them to have
a
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very violent behaviour at school.
Consequently
,
teachers
 are having
such
 a bad time with these
students
.
Additionally
,
students
 have no respect for their
teachers
, they utilise vulgar
vocabularies
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 with them. Long ago,
students
 were very obedient to
teachers
 as the laws and disciplines were very severe. We have
also
 observed that many
students
 whose
parents
 are divorced or their
parents
 are drug or alcohol addicts tend to have more worst
conducts
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. The government should provide psychological
supports
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 to youngsters and
parents
 as well,
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 for the betterment of
students
. In conclusion, I believe that
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the plague of
the
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society is not going to eradicate and
therefore
 authorities,
teachers
 and
parents
 should work
collaborately
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collaboratively
 for supporting
students
 who are in difficulties.
Teachers
 are sometimes underpaid, if the government increases their salary, they might have more interest to work with these
students
 who have bad behaviours.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational system
  • motivation
  • teacher shortage
  • work-life balance
  • job security
  • incentives
  • remuneration
  • public appreciation
  • career prospects
  • professional growth
  • retention rates
  • policy reforms
  • recruitment strategies
  • teaching methods
  • educational resources
  • government funding
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