"These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary school. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?"

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recent years, we have noticed that

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people are interested to become

teachers

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in

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secondary school. The main reason justifying

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is the behaviour of

students

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discuss and propose some solutions to

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issue. Teaching is

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admirable job which requires

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, skills and love for

children

. Unfortunately, many people's interest in

this

particular job is diminishing mainly because of student's behaviours.

Children

at school are conducting themselves very badly and

teachers

are having difficulties

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these young people.

Such

behaviours are due to the tolerance of

parents

today at home.

Parents

are not guiding their

children

with

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and

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more imposing strict regulations. So, many

children

tend to act deliberately,

consequently

, their conducts are absolutely out of control.

Similarly

, other reasons leading to the bad behaviour of

children

is that they are exposed to violence, sex and inappropriate videos which are not suitable for their age.

Moreover

, many teenagers are influenced by peer groups and drugs, which eventually

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them to have

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very violent behaviour at school.

Consequently

,

teachers

are having

such

a bad time with these

students

.

Additionally

,

students

have no respect for their

teachers

, they utilise vulgar

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with them. Long ago,

students

were very obedient to

teachers

as the laws and disciplines were very severe. We have

also

observed that many

students

whose

parents

are divorced or their

parents

are drug or alcohol addicts tend to have more worst

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. The government should provide psychological

supports

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to youngsters and

parents

as well,

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for the betterment of

students

. In conclusion, I believe that

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the plague of

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society is not going to eradicate and

therefore

authorities,

teachers

and

parents

should work

collaborately

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collaboratively

for supporting

students

who are in difficulties.

Teachers

are sometimes underpaid, if the government increases their salary, they might have more interest to work with these

students

who have bad behaviours.