You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, tell him/her about the gift tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend explain why you chose this gift for your friend

Dear Clara, I am glad to write
you
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after a long time. Hope you and your family are doing well. I am so delighted to let you know that I bought a watch for your upcoming birthday
next
month. It is from
brand
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a brand
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called Fossil where you find
limited
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the limited
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collection
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in your place and will be more expensive. It is coming with an oval dial with
strap
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a strap
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in red
color
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which
your
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favourite. One of
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my cousins
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cousins
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friend
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is travelling to Bristol and staying near to your place. So I am planning to send
this
along with him
on
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next
week. I will share your contact details with him and he will be contacting you to hand
over
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. I am aware that you are fond of watches and you have a good collection.
Hence
, I thought of adding
this
brand to it. It is a variety
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of design
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design
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and I am sure you will like it. I am eagerly waiting for your reply once you receive it to know
about
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how
do
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you feel about the gift I am going
send
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. Best Wishes, Maria
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