People are spending a lot of money in art and sports events. Is this a good or bad thing? Give your opinion.
Art
and sports
are popular topics among people
nowadays, a lot
of people
found them interesting, therefore
, they are willing to spend a lot
of money
on them. In my opinion, spending money
on something that you like is not always a bad thing, however
, spending money
should be limited according to an individual's ability.
Art
can express many feelings differently according to each people
's background and experiences. A lot
of people
feel calm and peaceful after looking at some artworks as well as decorating them in their homes which gives them a positive atmosphere and improves their mental health. For instance
, I got a piece of art
as a birthday gift from my best friend and I put it in my bedroom which always gave me positive energy every time when I watched it. Thus
, it is very reasonable that people
would like to purchase artwork for the reason that it can benefit one's life in some ways such
as mental health.
Some people
especially men spend a lot
of money
on attending sports
events and sports
items which is very acceptable because different people
have different hobbies and every individual has the right to do so. Apart from that, watching sports
can give some people
happiness and a cheerful feeling which is a very great thing. For example
, my best friend used to spend a lot
of money
on watching football matches, therefore
she loved to exercise which helped her get in shape and healthy because she got inspiration from football players who are very in shape and look healthy.
In conclusion, spending money
on art
and sports
events is not always a bad thing, but people
should make their decision before every spending, and measure their abilities beforehand. Spending money
more than your buying ability is unreasonable and should not be supported.Submitted by clairchengun on
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