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“Do you think extra-curricular activities are important in a student’s life?” Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Students
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 are the future of our country. So, they should be taught well in order to do something good for their country. In my opinion, despite studying only,
students
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 should participate in other extra
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 to remain physically and mentally healthy. In
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 help the pupil to boost his confidence. Participating and Competing with their peer groups in school teach them various life skills like co-operation, and helping others and these skills are useful in their career.
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, participating in any sports game teaches coordination with their own team members and competitive spirit with the opposite team.
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, extra action in an adult's life is helpful in becoming self-confident.
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, extra-curricular
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 help in maintaining good health.
Students
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 easily get habitual of playing and participating in games, it helps them in burning their calories and excessive fat. They will never get any health issues in their life.
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, it is seen that schools are organizing different
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 and camps for
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students
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 physical
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 to make them fit.
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, If the student is healthy and fit, he or she can pursue his career as a sports person, trainer or other.
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, extra
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 in schools help a student to keep their body in shape. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that it is necessary to have extra
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 in schools for
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 to keep their morale up and maintain their bodies fit and disease-free, and
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 will help them in their future.
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