Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, some
people
think it is better for government to make a bigger investment in railways than roads. I completely agree with Use synonyms
this
idea. Linking Words
This
essay will explain the reason why railway development will be more beneficial than road construction projects.
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, Linking Words
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rail-based
rail based
transportation modes would decrease the level of air pollution in a city. Since the Add a hyphen
rail-based
rail
network developed, Use synonyms
people
are able to transport by train to any district they want. The citizens do not have to use or buy private vehicles Use synonyms
such
as cars and motorcycles to commute. Linking Words
Thus
, the carbon emission in a certain city could be lowered. Linking Words
For instance
, I have been to Singapore which has an extensive Linking Words
rail
connection in the country. On my trip to Singapore, I could breathe comfortably as the amount of pollution from cars was very low. Based on Use synonyms
this
, transporting by Linking Words
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rail based
like trains could improve Add a hyphen
rail-based
air
quality of a specific area.
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the air
Secondly
, an individual can travel faster by train. Railroads have been built Linking Words
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specifically
specificly
for the trains. Correct your spelling
specifically
On the other hand
, the roads have been built to facilitate multiple sorts of vehicles including those which have large Linking Words
size
like trucks and buses. During the peak hours, the main roads would be congested and Change the noun form
sizes
people
would take Use synonyms
longer
time to travel. Correct article usage
a longer
For instance
, I have to spend 1 hour Linking Words
for
10 Change preposition
on
kilometer
trip by car, whereas I only need 15 minutes to be arrived at the same place and distance by the MRT. From my experience, I think Change the spelling
kilometre
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rail-based
rail based
transportation could make Add a hyphen
rail-based
traveling
more time efficient.
To sum up, I definitely support the opinion about prioritizing developments on railways. It is environment friendly and it enables Change the spelling
travelling
people
to transport for less time.Use synonyms
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