Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that an individual’s clothes can affect the

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impressions about his personality traits and cultural background.

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many

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believe that somebody’s character and culture can be predicted by his look ,others and I disagree with them. There are two reasons why others and I do not agree with

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view.

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and foremost is a matter of individuals' personal preferences that are being changed over time due to different factors.

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, someone who works in a private company for more than 8 hours a day and formerly wore a suit, today his convenience has a priority for him, so he prefers to wear comfortable clothes like a T-shirt and jeans.

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, the globalization phenomenon that enhances communications among communities leads to coming close cultures in the world.

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, when a female from Iran travels to India and buys an Indian garment, which is known as Sari, when she is wearing

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in her country,

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, we will receive the wrong information about her culture.

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, some

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believe that guessing

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's personalities and cultural backgrounds from their clothes is possible.

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, there is a kind of men's pants in the Kurdistan province of Iran, which is called

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Patrol

, and almost all men wear

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there.

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, every man who wears these pants probably will be Kurdish.

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, the rest of the

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of other provinces have access to buy and use them these days.

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, judging

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's cultural origin based on their clothing will be misleading. To conclude, some may argue that the appearance of

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can consider a sign of their personality and culture, but I say that because of changing personal preferences and the phenomenon of globalization these judgments are not

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reliable way.

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

garments
traditional attire
sartorial choices
expressive style
cultural identity
psychological implications
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globalization
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societal norms
economic constraints
subcultures
fashion movements
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that a country’s wealth is dependant on the health of its citizens. Other people argue that education is a better indicator of a nation’s wealth and well-being. What is your opinion? What are some other factors that contribute to the growth and prosperity of a country?

It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.