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some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, shoudl be required to work in the country where they did their training . others belive they should be free to work in another coutnry if they wish . Discuess boh these views and give your opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #shoudl #work #country #belive #coutnry #discuess #boh
The given chart shows information about how females in one country spent their weekly salaries between 1968 and 2018. In
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 chart, there are 8 things ladies spent money on them: food, housing, fuel and power, clothing, household goods, personal goods, transport and leisure. Overall, while food recorded the highest spending field 35%
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 the total income, fuel and power
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 the lowest in the same year with a little more
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%. We see the “ Household goods” has the same value since 1968. The
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 highest value in 2018 was housing 10%
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 the income.
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, “Transport”, ”Personal goods”, “Fuel and power” and “Leisure” had almost the same value in 2018 and recorded almost 10% for each, food was the highest. spending area and registered 35%. In 1968, “fuel and power” and “personal goods” was the lowest with less than 5%. The highest spending in the same year went
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 Leisure which hit more than 20% of the income.
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