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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#universities #students
University education is important for all
males
 and
females
 undoubtedly in any
subject
 area. Some people argue that having equal opportunities to study for
both
males
 and
females
 in all
subject
 areas is useless. But my opinion is universities should give chances equally to
males
 and
females
 in every
subject
. According to human rights,
both
genders
 must be permitted to study any
subject
 area.
Then
 universities cannot limit the
number
 of
females
enrol
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 in the
subject
. In our
society
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 we can see male and female doctors, engineers, nurses and scientists.
Both
genders
 in any position take the responsibilities and they will be
subject
 to all the rules and regulations regarding
to
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that post. If
both
genders
 can hold these positions, they should have an equal opportunity to enter
the
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university.
Moreover
, in the present world, the
number
 of
females
 is higher than the
number
 of
males
.
Therefore
, if an equal
number
 of male and female students get admitted in every
subject
 offered in a university, more areas of research and employment would be explored by women and that would benefit the country as they would contribute more. Meanwhile,
this
 will ensure
the
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women's empowerment and
the
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society
 would benefit from
this
 arrangement.
Definitely
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this
 will affect the betterment of the economy and the
society
 of the world. In conclusion, as
both
genders
 cover all the positions in
the
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society
 as their occupation and it is a human right,
both
males
 and
females
 should have the equal opportunity to study
in
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all subjects in universities.
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