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Some people say it’s a waste of time when plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

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A small portion of the population argues that planning the
future
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 is a waste of time, people should stay focused on the current time. I disagree with the notion because from my perspective, to become successful in
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 planning is prominent.
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 statement.
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, if talking about personal
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then
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future
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 goals are predominant. With an aim in mind, though it could be a small-term goal, people feel excited and optimistic. On top of that, they feel productive and out of chaos where they have to think about what I am going to do today.
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, every person at a particular age set his needs, and
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fulfilling that needs
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 is crucial without thinking about steps it could be a mess and more wasting time.
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, planning is necessary to get what you desire.
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 to it, from a business point of view, it is significant to make a
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 before implementing any idea.
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, when organizations make any product it takes several months or years depending on the project, and prior to any step, they
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 gather a meeting of team members, where they create a business
plan
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 to know the
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 benefits, risks, and other aspects which clearly depicts
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.
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, the entire company and its workers are fully dependent on the
future
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plan
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. In conclusion,
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 some masses believe that living in the present-day makes folk happy and stress-free, having plans for upcoming
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 feels contented, and to become successful in
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 it is necessary to have a planned
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 not only for personal
life
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 but for professional level as well.
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