The charts below show information about the participants in the Olympics from 1924 to 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows
information
on the Add an article
the information
number
of Olympic Use synonyms
athletes
from 1924 to 2012, Use synonyms
while
the bar chart shows how many men and women competed.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
athletes
competing in the Olympics has significantly expanded since it started. Use synonyms
Additionally
, there were always more male Linking Words
athletes
than female competitors, but the difference shrank dramatically over time as the proportion of female participants increased quickly.
The bar graph shows that there were not many women competing, but by 1952, there were roughly 500 female Use synonyms
athletes
. Use synonyms
Then
it peaked in 2012 at about 5000 after being under 1500 in 1984. Linking Words
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of men was significantly larger, starting at 3000 in the first year and rising steadily until it peaked at about 6000 in 2012.
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According to
the line graph, the first Olympics had participation from about 3500 participants. Linking Words
This
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number
increased steadily, reaching almost 6000 in 1984. The Use synonyms
number
rose the most dramatically between 1984 and 2012, rising by 5500 and reaching fewer than 11500.Use synonyms
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