you have recently moved to a different house. write to your English speaking friend -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

#house #english #friend #-explain #-describe #-invite #visit

Dear Anna, the reason that I am writing to you is that I have moved to a new house in Negombo recently. In my ,opinion

this

is a very nice place with a quiet neighbourhood.

This

is because my previous residence was quite far from the main road and took a very long time to reach the town,

however

this

apartment is very convenient for daily travelling. The new house is very spacious and it has four bedrooms and three bathrooms on each floor with a kitchen area and living room area on the ground floor. My favourite area is the rooftop that opens to the nearby lagoon. Please come and visit me

this

Christmas. I am sure we can have a good time and maybe even organise a BBQ on the rooftop. I am very excited to see you. Please call me if you have any problem finding the directions. Bye! see you soon.

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you have recently moved to a different house. write to your English speaking friend -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

the number of people are at risk at serious health problem is only because of overweight. what is the reason and how it can be solved?

Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The internet is generally considered as a blessing for mankind. Do the advantages of it outweigh its disadvantages?

Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.