you have recently moved to a different house. write to your English speaking friend -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Anna, the reason that I am writing to you is that I have moved to a new house in Negombo recently. In my ,opinion

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is a very nice place with a quiet neighbourhood.

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is because my previous residence was quite far from the main road and took a very long time to reach the town,

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apartment is very convenient for daily travelling. The new house is very spacious and it has four bedrooms and three bathrooms on each floor with a kitchen area and living room area on the ground floor. My favourite area is the rooftop that opens to the nearby lagoon. Please come and visit me

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Christmas. I am sure we can have a good time and maybe even organise a BBQ on the rooftop. I am very excited to see you. Please call me if you have any problem finding the directions. Bye! see you soon.

nayomi28

Sep 20, 2022

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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