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Now days, distance learning have gained in popularity but some people argue that courses can never be as good as those taken by attending a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In today's era, advanced technology plays a model role in everyone's lives. Some people think learning from a
distance
 is becoming popular
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nowadays whereas a number of masses believe that studying in
college
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 or on campus has many benefits rather than online. I strongly agree with there are many advantages to studying on the campus
To begin
 with, studying in college, students can easily socialize with teachers and friends.
For instance
, they can easily understand the way of teaching.
Furthermore
, pupils can easily ask the questions directly to the teachers, if they do not understand during the class.
In addition
, learners can more participate in
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 of activities in the regular sessions because they can get along with the subjects they are researching.
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, people can do handwork or necessary projects in class. To illustrate, individuals can focus on a teacher during the session better than on a computer. A survey conducted by the UK in 1992 , found that students who attend the courses in university have more practical skills than
distance
 learners. On the
second
 hand, students who learn from a
distance
 do not concentrate on studying.
Moreover
, they do not have good practical or communication skills that are most important for the future. Learners cannot directly communicate with friends or teachers.
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, they are not able to understand how to work in a group or on
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 project. To conclude, someone thinks
distance
 study is better because of the new world technology.
However
, I argue that studying face to face is more profitable and advantageous.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distance education
  • Flexibility
  • Online courses
  • Remote learning
  • Interactive platforms
  • Virtual classrooms
  • Self-discipline
  • Hands-on experience
  • Practical exposure
  • Peer interaction
  • Networking
  • Self-motivation
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