Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir, I am writing to bring to your attention that I was unable to enrol myself on the culinary course as I was sick and unable to attend college for the past 10 days and would like to enrol myself on the same. Hope you will consider my request favourably. Let me explain my situation in detail. I was infected with malaria and was hospitalised for the past 10 days. During my period of absence, the enrollment for the extra-curricular courses was opened. As the due date for applying has surpassed, I am unable to complete my application.

However

, I have enlisted my name in the list of interested candidates. I would request you to consider my request to include me in the course. It not only adds value to my academics but

also

helps me in taking my cooking skill to

level. I am ok to attend the evening classes as long as I am allocated to the above-mentioned course. Thank you for your consideration. Yours truly John

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

The Closing

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