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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some believe that photographs are not a reliable source of news while other consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both the views and your opinion.

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These days, different types of newspaper publishing companies use graphical
images
 to publish their
news
 to gain more attention from the readers. While others oppose
this
 process of publishing
news
. I have discussed both points of view along with my opinion. Photographic newspapers can easily get more readers as people prefer to see the visuals of incidents more than reading the big articles regarding them because of several reasons.
First
 and foremost, due to the hectic schedule of a person looking at photos is much easier to get the whole view of the
news
 rather than going through it word by word.
Secondly
, in the digital era photographs obviously looks more appealing to a reader.
For instance
, Recently published
news
 regarding the death of Queen Elizabeth II was looking more griefing since it was in the photos almost in every newspaper all around the world and
also
 on the internet not just in a couple of words. Despite of busy schedule, everyone can guess the
news
 easily by just looking at the different shaded of pictures
news
.
However
, Photographic
images
 grab the habit of reading for the people who love reading as some
news
 is published in only
images
 without any explanation of the situation resulting in misinterpretation of the whole situation by the public.
Moreover
, People think that if the
news
 would be published with
images
 children of the coming generation would not prefer or make a move to read the whole
news
 due to its convenience and would not be able to know the importance of reading which I
also
 consider is the appropriate and undeniable point. Though both perspectives have their own importance I would prefer the
news
 should be published with
images
 and written words as the Public would never prefer the
news
 just by words and
also
 for the motivation of reading in a young generation there could be some events or some seminars to enhance their reading skills. To sum up,
although
 the trend of newspapers is declining because of electronic gadgets the publication of
news
 could not be demolished and requires both ways to publish the
news
 graphically and in writing form no matter it's on paper or on digital devices.
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