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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Home ownership
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 and property rights have been one of the most important pillars of
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market-oriented
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market oriented
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 economies globally. For the average
person
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, owning a home requires decades worth of loan repayments or savings.
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, renting does not require taking
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high duration
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 commitments. Household formation is a key driver of stable economic growth and wealth creation. Governments encourage it, through public policies as it leads to family formation and a stable society. It
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 provides
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 psychological stability, as there is always going to be a
house
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 to live in. Taking ownership of a
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,
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ultimately
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 frees up a lot of discretionary spending for the average consumer, which is very good for economic growth.
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, owning a
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 entails a
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 commitment
towards
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 a
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specific
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specific
 area. If jobs remain plentiful,
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 the repayment for the
house
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 does not become an issue. It will
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 restrict any
person
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 to pursue greener pastures elsewhere. In that scenario, it is important for the
person
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 to be able to
rent
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 the
house
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 and get a good rental yield out of it.
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, he or she will have to shift to another
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 in another area and
rent
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 while paying the loan on a pre-existing
house
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. Renting,
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hand
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 provides a lot of mobility at the cost of outgoing
rent
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 which could have been invested over the years, to gain ownership of a
house
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. Typically, when professionals are in the early stage of their
career
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careers
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, they like to
rent
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.
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 provides them mobility while building up their savings towards eventually owning a
house
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. These excess savings can
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 be utilized to get a better return through financial instruments compared to rental yields. The ability to own and
rent
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 a
house
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 are both equally important. If everyone owns a
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 there will be
no-one
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 to
rent
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 to and vice versa. Renting and owning a
house
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 are activities that happen during different stages of life for any
person
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. Giving undue importance
towards
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 owning a
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, can lead to people making commitments to buy a
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 before they are ready. It can
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 push up housing prices for everyone and create economic bubbles.
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