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In some countries, young people are encouraged to take a year off for travelling and working between high school and university. What are the advantages and Disadvantages of this?

#countries #people #year #school #university
Some people
gives
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 a suggestion that, before starting
the
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university life, students should spend a year
in
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working or
traveling
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.
This
 essay will describe that experience gained and expanding network are the biggest advantage of
this
, but delaying careers and reducing motivation to study are the main disadvantages. Working after high school is a great opportunity to gain work
experiences
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. If it is a job that
related
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 to our future study
then
 we can practice from it and
this
 might even help
to
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 complete our
assignment
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 and to get better exam results in university. Working before university is a great way to making new friends as well. While we are working, we can meet up with people from different background and with different skills . Alternatively,taking break in between studies
also
 have some major drawbacks .
Traveling
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 can end up making a student lazy in studying and disturbing from focusing. Vacation gives more time to spend in entertaining than learning
such
 as having party, playing games, etc.
Thus
 , it is like wasting time by doing nothing and decreases motivation in learning. In conclusion,
although
 traveling and working before
third
 level education has many benefits for students, it is important to notice that they harm students’ motivation and can face difficulties in their future careers.
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