Some say you should always marry for love, others say that in an uncertain world, it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss bith views and give your opinion.

Marriage is

one

of the most ceremonies in

an

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human

life

. Many people held that we should marry to

love

while

,

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others argue that we should marry for

money

.

This

essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On the

one

hand,

love

marriages are highly successful as couples do understand each other.

In other words

, in any difficulty of

life

,

love

we help them work together against

this

situation and find a solution.

For example

, the majority of long-lasting marriages resist through the years due to the amount of

love

they feel towards each other.

Moreover

, in

love

marriages, we have the ability to choose the most compatible partner. To put it differently, a compatible partner means fewer arguments with each other and

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goal in

life

.

On the other hand

,

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for

money

give financial security. To put it simply, we will never have to worry about

money

in our

life

.

For instance

, many women tend to become a stay at

home

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wife

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as their spouses make enough

money

to take care of the family. Their children have the best education.

Also

,

money

means power in our modern society.

In other words

, people respect the wealthy person more than the poor

one

.

For example

, a poor family member that no

one

considered will automatically be

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differently once he

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to become wealthy. To conclude, I believe that a combination of

love

and

money

leads to a happy and successful marriage.