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The computer is widely used in education and some people think that teachers will not play important roles in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?

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These days using technology in a wide range of schools causes fear that
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 are not important as before. Some people think
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 idea. while others believe
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 not correct and it is very difficult to use these
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 the humans.
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 essay will discuss that and I will write down my private conclusion. On the one hand, people argue that the teacher will replace them with
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. there are many advantages while using
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.the important idea here is . Everything going to business and
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 will save money and give more income to companies.
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, 90% of the logistic field is confirmed to robots.
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 and new technology give us the to attend classes anywhere and at any time. And
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 situation will give those schools unlimited sources. On other hand. Others believe that no one will abandon humans ,especially
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.
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 are very important and they change everything for the best and it has a significant effect. But in learning feeling necessary. They think that major problems happened recently with machines
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 Tesla crash with self-drive cars. they guess that would not happen if those cars have human drivers.And those are some disadvantages. In my opinion, After analysing both viewpoints. The computer will help organisations and assist them clearly both with
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. that make teaching better and help
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, the
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 have to use
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 to be able to get more benefits.
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