Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future career success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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for chasing their

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in the future. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

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comment and in the following paragraphs, I would shed light on several reasons to support my stance. On the one hand,

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are not merely for the purpose of entering

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and foremost, the courses which

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to have no relation to their future occupations are able to broaden

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horizons of them.

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art class, which can improve their aesthetic, they might achieve the success of being an outstanding UI designer by merely learning the coding lesson.

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the

students

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they keen to step in and choose

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certain jobs from the bottom of their hearts.

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, diverse choices and possibilities are offered to them as they can search

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most desirable occupation during the whole school time.

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in the salad days limits

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selections of them. Even though some subjects may be beneficial to their

career

success, they still

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a range of possibilities which may discover afterwards.

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, it is common worldwide that employees gradually find out they are not suitable for their current job and struggle to change to another area due to their lacking

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some skills which are too late to learn.

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,

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situation can cause various

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of anxiety and have a negative impact on their own lives. In conclusion, though offering only subjects in schools is indeed an efficient way to help

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their

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, I believe widely studies along with various advantages are able to

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to

students

not only in their

career

but

also

in their personal lives.