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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
A recent controversy revolves around the most fundamental aspect; the question of whether to buy
newspapers
 or to utilise modern technology to read the content online
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free of cost.
This
 essay disagrees with the notion and discusses some supporting points against the fact that online content can never entirely replace existing
newspapers
. A few observations offer support to consider that absorbing knowledge from
newspapers
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 the best option. One supporting argument states that the reliability of
news
 presented in a newspaper is significantly higher when compared to free online sources.
Moreover
, the websites that provide the
news
 are often not trustworthy. There were many instances of generating fake
news
 and circulating it on social media. Consider one of the most circulated
newspapers
 in India, The Hindu, as an example. The trust shown by the public
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this
 newspaper was not generated in a single day. It took over 100 years to constantly generate reliability in
news
 and later got
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recognition. Another relatively known positive factor that warrants favouring
newspapers
 is the authentic feeling they possess while reading. The perfectly organised
newspapers
 are superior to watching the same thing on tiny, sophisticated screens. Most of them are even considering the damage done to their eyes. When concentrating too much on their screens,
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causes eye burns, increases long-sightedness and many more.
As a result
, even though it adds a minor amount of money to their expenditure, people prefer
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old-fashioned
newspapers
. To conclude, analysing the advantages offered by traditional
newspapers
, I personally think that it's better to purchase them
instead
 of reading the same from unofficial blogs. Even though it manifests some serious controversy, the
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 supporting points demand
such
 action.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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