Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computer should replace them. Howevee, others do not agree. Discuss both aides and give your opinion.

It is often argued that
libraries
are needless and that can be substituted by technology.Whereas,there are some people that do not believe it.I personally consider that gadgets can supersede
libraries
in the near future.What is more,I will support
this
view with arguments in the following paragraphs.
First
of all, it is clear that
libraries
are the source of knowledge and aid them to find out needed information.
In other words
,
libraries
always have a variety of books and anyone can easily find any
data
he or she seeks.
Furthermore
,from a child to adult use
libraries
as a place for enjoyment,where they can read in peace and silence.As an example,research shows that 60 per cent of visitors of
libraries
said that they go to the library for adding knowledge that it provides and for adoring esthetic places.
Secondly
,
libraries
can be replaced by computers,for their speed of searching for information and
convenience
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they provide.
That is
to say, people can easily look for any type of
data
without going to
libraries
,which is a big benefit for introverts and disabled people.
Moreover
, it is complicated to find exact the information you wanted to know in
libraries
and it is time-consuming.Whilst with the Internet's help everybody can search for
data
in a little time.
For instance
,in terms of time,it is convenient,especially if someone is in a hurry. To conclude,
although
libraries
provide opportunities for public's hobby and a range of books,I strongly agree that they can easily be superseded by computers,because of their speed of finding
data
and the conveniences it gives
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