Your share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concerns about my party-boy roommate in our college hostel. I must state that Ali has lots of friends who come to our room each day.
As a result
of this
, I have never slept until midnight, also
most of the time I have exams the day after and because of that, I will get bad results in my exams, particularly in mathematics and geography.
Additionally
, the other students in the hostel are also
very unhappy because there are lots of strangers in their zone and they feel uncomfortable. Two months ago one watch was stolen and we could not find the thief. We believe someone who is inside this
group made this
problem.
Moreover
, they fought with each other that the hotel must be damaged because of these situations. Over the two months, as a visitor of your hotel, I have never been in such
a hard condition. So please help us to solve these problems.
While
I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.
If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Kind regards,
Salih Zeki KöniSubmitted by salihzekikoni on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear logical structure, with a distinct opening, body, and conclusion. The body paragraphs should each address a unique aspect of the complaint.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea for clarity and effectiveness. It is advisable to separate complaints about noise and disturbances from issues relating to theft and security.
task achievement
The task response must fully address the prompt. Be specific about how your studies and life are affected, and consider suggesting possible solutions.
task achievement
While the writing tone is somewhat suitable, strive for a balance between being formal and conveying your distress. Steer clear of an informal or casual tone in a formal letter of complaint.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite