many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, governments take

some

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certain steps to make a

progress

in different aspects of society, from economical improvements to

people’s

welfare.

Although

authorities believe that improvement in

economy

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is their vital target, individuals think that all

types

of

developments

should have the same value. In

this

essay, both sides of the view will be discussed, and I will make my comment in the

last

paragraph. As mentioned earlier, governments should be responsible for economical problems, considering to

highten

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heighten

tighten

the quality of

people’s

lives.

In other words

, a developed

economy

leads to decreasing

diffrenece

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difference

differences

between poor and rich and it provides people with more satisfaction. To elaborate more on

this

, take my country as an example. Recent

researches

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have revealed the amount of satisfaction among my people fellow has considerably fallen as long as some economical problems have happened which authorities could not solve

them

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yet.

Therefore

,

economy

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the economy

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has a significant impression on

people’s

welfare and

government

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the government

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should be careful about economical issues. Despite what has already

mentioned

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, people believe there are lots of

developments

that government should effort to.

Although

making

progress

on

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economy

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the economy

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could cause some

developments

in different

aspect

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aspects

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of

people’s

life

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lives

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, there are

also

some

types

of

progress

that government should work on them individually. The

first

and foremost reason is just working on

economy

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the economy

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causes weakness

on

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the different

aspect

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aspects

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of society and considers

to

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inequality.

Moreover

, a developed country needs to be powerful

in

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different sides,

such

as

politic

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politics

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and

military

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the military

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. In conclusion,

although

I believe that economic

progress

is one of the most vital

ambition

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ambitions

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, other

types

of improvements are completely worthwhile. Together, authorities should care about all

types

of

developments

in our society.