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this topic from The tables below gives information on consumer spending on different items in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

this topic from The tables below gives information on consumer spending on different items in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of household cash that four European nations spend on four factors.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 all four regions spend most of their cash on food and drink and housing, but much less on clothing and entertainment. The outplay of
Germany
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 was generally higher than the other three countries. In terms of housing, nearly one-third of their earnings was spent on it in France, UK and
Germany
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,
while
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 the figure for Turkey was one-fifth.
In contrast
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, Regarding Food and Drink, Turkey spent the most at 36%, contrasting to the other 4 countries, which spent around a quarter of these
items
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.
Furthermore
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, with the other two
items
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, the lowest expenditure was on clothing which accounted for under 16% in all regions.
Germany
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 spent most on these
items
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 at just 15% of their national expenditure, which was around double that of France (7%).
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, people from France spent 13% of their income on entertainment, followed by the UK and Turkey. The maximum amount of spending on the same
items
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 by
Germany
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 (19%).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, items with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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