Your friend will be staying at home but you can be their with him because of some reasons so write letter in which you can explain How to the keys How to use electrical appliances Recommend some interesting places to visit.

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Dear John, I hope

this

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letter finds you in best the of

your

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health and spirit. I am glad you are visiting my

home

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although

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I am on a business trip to another city

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week but can still accommodate you in my

home

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. You can get the keys from our watchman Kumar and tell him that you are my friend so that he will give you

visitor’s

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the visitor’s

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form along with the house keys. The coffee machine works after you turn on the green button which is behind the machine and make sure

plug-in

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plug in

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the toaster before using it. The microwave is automatic, all you need to do is set the timer. You can visit the Lakeside shopping mall, Neil Peter park and a local library within a short stroll from my

home

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. I suggest you

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visit the bird festival which happens once

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a year at the Swan river in the city. I hope you enjoy your stay at my

home

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and will meet you soon. Warm Wishes, Santosh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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