Some people believe that teenagers should require doing unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and community as well. Agree, Disagree
Children are the backbone of society and will run everything in future. So, people tend to say that youth should participate in social work without expecting money in return. Because it can nurture their skills and character. I
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notion of youngsters’ dedication to community jobs.
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To begin
with, the main reason is, it enhances personality and inner satisfaction. When teenagers start working for society Linking Words
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they interact with people of different cultures, ethnicities and languages etcetera that polish their communication skills. That helped them to be successful among team members. Linking Words
For instance
, adolescents exchange words with rural individuals to teach them to send their children to school. Linking Words
Instead
of being selfish, adolescents learnt about verbal and non-verbal talk; touch therapy, patience, silence, cooperation and helping others. Meanwhile, serving the human-beings, youngsters inculcate new abilities from an early age.
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, teenagers can utilize their free time for productive things. In fact, they can avoid destructive habits Linking Words
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as playing video games or roaming with friends by devoting that time to the needy population. Linking Words
For example
, school-going boys can teach illiterates in their spare hours. Linking Words
Likewise
, they can donate money as per their capability. Linking Words
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generally
adolescents have less cash but intention matters most. Add a comma
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can be beneficial for them personally as well.
In conclusion, community service is advantageous to both societies and to teens as well as an identity builder and a responsible future citizen. Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...