Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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In our society, we are struggling with the exceeding
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and
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that are accumulated everywhere around the world including
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ocean surface. Among many causes of
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, many people
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disregarding the consequence
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our ecosystem if we continue to produce more
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;
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, there are some solutions. Many people
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these days ignore the significance of the adverse effect if they continue to produce more rubbish. Corporations,
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, are manufacturing countless products
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only for
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profit, even if
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can harm our planet. As we produce and pile more
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around the world, it will cause many wild animals to extinct and suffer, and
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, it can
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global warming.
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, it seems that many people are inclined to feel irresponsible for
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wastes
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and
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, we could see countless
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piled above the ocean
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surface
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and foremost,
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politicians need to prohibit producing products that are difficult to recycle
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as plastic. That way, we can at least hinder the waste accumulation to the level that are can not manage. Concurrently, there should be more
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policies for firms to manufacture to prevent
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any excessive
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, and ultimately, lower the
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rubbish
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amount
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, if the companies infringe the new policies
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as restricting from
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unrecyclable
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items ,
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a considerable
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should be endowed. To summarize, the world is suffering
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heavy
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amount
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garbages
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being produced on a daily basis and without proper solutions.
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it is significant for
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businesses to be profitable, our planet is more important to protect for the future. The governments should implement to increase the standards of the policies and penalties in
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to producing and
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garbages
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so that we all can be responsible for the protection of our environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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