In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
These days
can be seen
the cultivation industry has developed, Verb problem
,
however
many people around the world
die because of being hungry. This
essay mentioned some reasons and also
recommended some solutions.
Nowadays, although
cultivation has experienced wide
progress rather than Correct word choice
wider
Correct article usage
the past
past
, Correct article usage
the past
this
progress belongs to some communities and in many parts of the world
, agriculture remained
in the old way. In fact, these countries do not have the Wrong verb form
remains
technology
or infrastructure to do modern cultivation. For example
, in Iran despite suitable land, people do not have modern tools or do not use modern method for agriculture, so the government need to import crops. Additionally
, many parts of the country cannot afford to provide or import crops for their population. For instance
, most African communities deal with being hungry. This
is because the governments do not have enough budget to provide food
.
On the other hand
, to prevent from hungry, developed regions should cooperate with each other and can help other countries. In other words
, reaching society by giving money or their
sciences to poor society can improve the Correct pronoun usage
apply
food
problem in the world
. To illustrate, Israel help
the UAE and Wrong verb form
helped
give
them the Wrong verb form
gave
technology
to construct a building which can produce vegetables for all population of Dubai (which is located in the desert). In addition
, the UNESCO institute collects money and provides food
for poor nations in Africa and helps them to survive.
In conclusion, in my opinion, do
not Verb problem
apply
have
the Wrong verb form
having
technology
or being poor can make people hungry. Nevertheless
, the communities which are reached and have the technology
, by cooperating with poor countries can solve the need for food
around the world
.Submitted by moradkhanighane on
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