Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often thought that online learning has become more popular in recent days, while many believe that
classroom
study is the
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in-person
in person
learning in an institution is more beneficial for any Add a hyphen
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learners
.
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learner
Firstly
, classroom
learning is involved to
physical interaction with the instructors and the Change preposition
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learners
because in this
place they meet face-to-face. The instructors can bring their best due to long experience and can create an interactive environment. Learners
get a fair chance to have an effective interaction with their teachers in the classroom
. The classroom
environment is usually more dynamic and allows all learners
to actively participate and debate in all class activities. For example
, when a teacher presents any science practical, every student can actively participate on
that event, and they can learn practically. It is a great chance for any Change preposition
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learners
to learn actively and practically from physically
present in the institution.
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being physically
Secondly
, in classroom
learning, teachers have more control over students. Students must follow the rules related to the institution, otherwise
they will be punished. Their performance is being checked properly. They have to Add a comma
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the expectations of the teachers to excel in studies and other activities. Change the spelling
fulfil
Learners
must be punctual while attending their classes. For example
, their performance is regularly monitored by their instructors and administrative bodies. These build them self-discipline.
To sum up, it is obvious that learners
are more active in physical
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than the online courses because they are motivated and the
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learning, while their learning opportunities are limited in comparison to the online programs.Submitted by tofabd on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
