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SOME PEOPLE ARE BORN TO BE A LEADER. HOWEVER, OTHERS’ BELIEVE THAT LEADERSHIP CAN BE LEARNED. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Quality makes human. One of them
leadership
 is a very important condition.It is believed by some people that it is possible to learn
leadership
qualities
 while others think that talent must be from birth.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide reasons for the
second
 view is superior. On one hand, there are certain people who are born talented and have good
leadership
 skills than others
that is
 because of the genetical nature of the individual.
For example
, the former president of India Indhira Gandhi was born talented because her father
also
 served as a president and
also
 a good leader in guiding the nation in the correct way.
On the other hand
, it is possible to develop any type of
qualities
 by learning and
practicing
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 regularly, and
also
 captainship
qualities
 can be developed by gaining experience from the good leaders in the world.
For instance
, Adolf Hitler a famous leader from Germany, started his journey as a soldier and by his hard work and consistency in his service, he made the German army win World war I. In conclusion, I strongly believe that one can learn
leadership
qualities
 by indulging themself more in group-based activities.
As a result
, Everyone can become a Leader.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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