You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course, Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school, In your fetter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to your ask about my feedback on the cooking class which I took apart
last
week.
I should tell you the course was awesome. Due to
the practical skills which were provided in the course, now I am able to prepare several dishes for my family with simple ingredients.
Let me explain with a more realistic example. I provided my family with various plates since last
week, from seafood to vegetarian dishes. If I had joined the course sooner, I could have cooked better food for my
Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
month's party.
I would appreciate it if you would consider preparing meals for kids as the next topic. Although
I believe eating at home is healthier, my children need to encourage eating
at home Wrong verb form
be encouraged to eat
by
more exciting dishes. Change preposition
with
In addition
, concentrating on the cheaper ingredients would be a great idea as well.
I hope you consider my opinion favourably.
Yours faithfully
AliSubmitted by ali on
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coherence cohesion
Broaden the range of connective words and transition phrases to guide the reader smoothly through your ideas and to enhance paragraph linkage.
single idea per paragraph
Work on developing each idea fully in its respective paragraph, offering specific examples or details when possible.
task achievement
To fully achieve the task, provide a more detailed explanation of the elements of the course that you enjoyed and how exactly it has impacted your daily cooking habits.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a formal tone consistently and avoid informal language in a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite