Before a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

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Some
people
believe that using
internet
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may lead to a lot of
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difficulties
difficulities
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difficulties
instead
of many advantages. I partially disagree about
this
statement. Using
internet
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is been increased these days and has a lot of benefits.
First
, communication ways are improving better than past.
As a result
,
people
can connect to each other easily.
For example
, by using Whats Up App we can call online and see each other.
In addition
,
internet
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helps us to do more research.
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has a huge capacity for all
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of data. So,
person
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who wants to find
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especial
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information whit using
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could find it easy just
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one click at any search motors. As
internet
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is so accessible and useful in our life, it is so hard to live whit out it.
In contrast
, some
people
believe that using
internet
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has some disadvantages. The drawbacks which they believe include as below. At
first
, using
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any
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would be a time consumer.
For instance
, many
people
do not have enough knowledge to arrange their time correctly and
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their
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.
Additionally
, using
internet
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may be harmful for
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generation. Youth do not have enough
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themselves so, they
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check inappropriate sites and some
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of
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are increased.
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, pornography is common
as a result
of using
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. In
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, some believe that using
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has drawbacks more than benefits but in my
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the advantages are more than disadvantages and it would be hard for all to live without
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cyber-security
  • Data breach
  • Identity theft
  • Misinformation
  • Fake news
  • Connectivity
  • Instant messaging
  • Social media platforms
  • Revolutionized communication
  • Educational resource
  • Privacy concerns
  • Public opinion
  • Information access
  • Data vulnerability
  • Verification of information
  • Digital transformation
  • Online presence
  • Global village
  • Social harmony
  • Internet infrastructure
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