You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he/she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate, who is making my stay in the hostel miserable. I feel depressed by looking at his behaviour and

thus

impacting my preparation for semester exams. I am Suriya Krishnan, I stay in room no F-11, sierra block. I prominently see that my roommate makes a nuisance by inviting his friends to my room and hosting a party over the weekends, due to which I had to compromise on my sleep. Even though I tried to explain several times,

however

, it looks like I was taken for granted. As my exam dates are getting closer, I would like to bring

this

to your notice.

Also

, If you could help me by moving any one of us to the other place it will be so helpful and I would be able to focus on my exam. I never mind about the room type if I am able to do my work without hassle. I would appreciate your immediate attention in

this

matter. Yours sincerely, Suriya Krishnan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

180 words

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