Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Development is the most important factor for the developing
nation
rather than one developed. In ,society political parties focus on economic growth while people think that other sectors should be grown. In the
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there are many areas rather than the economy which are basic for survival and boosting the economic power. To commence with that, For the growing ,
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they are highly focused on economic progress because it will provide liquidity in the market. It will boost the earnings of people,
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the purchasing power of the public will increase and so on there is an opportunity for employment in the
nation
So, that import and export is increase and
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local demand will increase. As per the latest data from , the UN it is found that economic development is the only way to grow in the world and compete with other nations.
On the other hand
, when the government only focus on increasing the financial number there might be a chance of losing the country's tradition and
also
some other sector will be weak or not survive in the development. There are many areas we have to focus on equally like health, education, infrastructure and many others. All sector plays a similar role in the state.
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, It is more important for the government to consider the importance of the other sector. In my ,opinion it is important that all types of progress should be given the same consideration. because if we left the any of necessary departments it will impact another developed area.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
  • socio-economic development
  • quality of life
  • stakeholder
  • sustainable development
  • public sector
  • non-governmental organization (NGO)
  • civic engagement
  • green technology
  • quality of education
  • universal healthcare
  • cultural integrity
  • global competitiveness
  • human capital
  • innovation ecosystem
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