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Nowadays, it is becoming more popular to see animals to be kept in captivity, for instance, the zoo Do the advantage of keeping animal in the zoo outweight the disadvantage?

#animals #captivity #zoo #advantage #outweight
Animals
 are
very
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indispensable
indespensible
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indispensable
 part of the environment. In
modern
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 era, keeping
animals
 in the
zoo
 for watching them is very common. There are many pros than cons of the
zoo
 for
the
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humans and
animals
 that will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,
firstly
, there are many
species
 which can be preserved from
the
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extinction and zoos are the best place. It is noted by
survey
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since
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last
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the last
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 50 years
100 plus
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species
 have been saved due to preservation from the forest.
Secondly
, students or other people can gain knowledge about multifarious
animals
 by
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visiting
visitng
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visiting
 just one place.
For example
, in the
toronto
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zoo
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,zoo
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 every
species
 from each continent is present
such
 as
kangroo
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kangaroo
kangaroos
 from
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Australia
Austrailia
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Australia
,
penguins
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and penguins
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 from
Atlantic
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the Atlantic
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.
Consequently
, pupils get
best
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 experience about them.
However
, it is not hard for any creatures to live in
artificial
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an artificial
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 environment in which
animals
 live. They live in controlled
habitat
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habitats
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 and eat just given food which
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effects
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effect
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affect
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 their life cycle and age. In India,
chattbir
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chatting
zoo
 is the biggest
zoo
 in the country and every year death of
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at least
atleast
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at least
 10 different
species
 is recorded. In conclusion,
benefits
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 of
conservation
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the conservation
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 of
animals
 are more since
rare
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the rare
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creature
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creatures
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 can be saved and information
of
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about
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 several
animals
 can be taken.
Although
, drawbacks can not be neglected as
thier
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their
liives
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lives
 are compromised in the
human created
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 ambience.
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