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Writing Samples
Band 8.5

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

Subject: Job Opportunity – Full-Time Construction Support
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 Dear David, I hope
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 message finds you well. I'm writing to share more details about the job opportunity we discussed recently. The position to be filled requires someone with full-time working rights who is available to commute, attend on-site inspections and meetings, liaise with clients, and assist with compliance-related tasks.
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 is a newly created
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 designed to support the team and alleviate workload.To be considered, you must have your own car and insurance. The company offers a travel allowance and provides a fuel discount at OTR stores.
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, they have a referral program where you can earn $500 if you refer a friend who is hired. I genuinely believe you are a great fit for
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, especially given your strong customer service skills and the fact that the job is located near your home. The position offers structured training and paid travel reimbursement, making it a solid opportunity for growth. I highly recommend you submit your updated CV and cover letter directly to: [email protected]. I
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 encourage you to include your contact details and make yourself available for an interview as soon as possible.Feel free to call me at 0427 559 8XX if you’d like to discuss the
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 or if you would like me to act as a reference. Given your background and familiarity with the construction industry, I believe you stand a strong chance. Looking forward to hearing how it goes! Warm regards, Laura

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task achievement
Your letter is clear and covers all the points mentioned in the task. You provided good details about the job and why it's a good fit for your friend.
coherence and cohesion
Try to make the greeting and closing even more friendly to strengthen your connection with your friend. Adding a personal touch can make it warmer.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of your letter is good, with clear separation of ideas related to job details, suitability, and application process.
task achievement
Your tone is friendly and encouraging, which is great for a letter to a friend.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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