Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
day in age, there has been an increase in the number of young, freshly out of school, individuals who are taking a Linking Words
year
off studying to travel or work all around the world. It is a belief of some that 12 months away from academic work can be significantly beneficial for students when they come back, and I believe Use synonyms
that is
true. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss a few reasons why students take one Linking Words
year
off Use synonyms
studies
as well as it will bring clarity to my point of view.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, the main reason to take an academic break is to travel, Linking Words
this
offers the individuals a different perspective on Linking Words
life
, allowing them an opportunity to live in different cultures and meet Use synonyms
people
who are nothing like them. Use synonyms
Although
education plays a large role in what Linking Words
people
become as they progress in Use synonyms
life
, travelling gives something no other experience can ever give, the beauty of getting out of our comfort zones. Alternatively, other Use synonyms
people
choose these 12 months to experience a Use synonyms
life
of work. Use synonyms
For example
, working at a local petrol station or serving Linking Words
people
in hospitality, to earn money and pay for Use synonyms
studies
later. Both reasons come from the same idea. They take time to reflect on what truly matters in their lives and studying and paying expensive money is what is wanted.
Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, as some Linking Words
people
believe that Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
year
off is the best way to get out of our comfort zones, others might argue that taking a sabbatical Use synonyms
year
causes a few setbacks in academic Use synonyms
life
, as much as taking time off allows individuals to reflect on their lives and what they want, it Use synonyms
also
can make returning to Linking Words
studies
much more difficult, regaining the discipline once had can be a challenge not everyone is willing to face. Use synonyms
However
, I am of the opinion that regardless of the setbacks and challenges students face after, will never outweigh the positive experiences travelling or working for a whole Linking Words
year
brings to their future and present selves. I think Use synonyms
although
not a necessityLinking Words
,
if there is an opportunity to live Remove the comma
apply
such
an adventure, it is worth all the future difficulties.
In conclusion, even though there are some disadvantages to an educational break between school and Linking Words
further
Linking Words
studies
, the advantages it can have on a person's Use synonyms
life
are greater and what I believe shapes Use synonyms
people
into whom they want to be.Use synonyms
Submitted by luanafonarantes on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.