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The given schemes depict the modifications of an unspecified place in the year 2005 and today. Overall, it is clear that there are 3 main aspects with regard
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the difference between those 2 layouts, namely the additions, the relocations, and marginalizations.
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, the present layout has been larger and has more spare capacity to park automobiles. There has been a transformation in the top of the aforementioned airport between 2 specific years, having been constructed for turning into the Y shape with alternatively utilizing purpose, for commuting by trains in lieu of intaking the walkway accompanied by the addition of more gates by 12. When it comes to the remaining sectors, along with the left boundary of the airport, there have been some shops that can be witnessed as waiting-period amenities.
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, some additional utilities have shared a similar aim
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 as the bottom left corner with another opposite café, the bottom right-corner car hire, and 2 more departure and arrival gates each.
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, There has been a swaption of the check-in area from left to right.
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