artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity.some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.ato what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art
helps an individual to express his feelings, thoughts and ideas. Whereas some
artists
around the globe have not
given
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the appropriate
freedom
to express themselves.
This
blocking of
freedom
hampers the whole ideology of
art
and the true meaning behind it and I completely disagree with it. Countries like France, Italy and Spain who has
large
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history of revolutions and wars. And to depict these iconic battles they had
artists
who expressed themselves freely and shared the war stories with
rest
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the rest
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of the
world
.
Artists
living in Europe
has
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more
freedom
as they don't think that no
art
form is bad or questionable. Various
kind
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of music, dance and festivals are
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the outcome
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outcome
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of
this
freedom
allocated to
artists
which
has
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not only gained active audience but
also
renowned recognition around the globe.
For example
,
Mona
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Lisa painting which was painted during
World
War 2 is preserved by
French
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the French
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government and has been
a
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one of the famous tourist attractions of the city
Paris
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.
Furthermore
, the Taj Mahal of India
,
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depicts the historic time
where
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the Mughals ruled India. These all monuments and images are seen by the
world
because of the free creative space given to
artists
. Today, it is hard for people to express their
art
form due to political and social
dilemma
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. They can't express what they want as they might hurt some or the other society or culture. Asian continents contribute a lot to
total
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world
population and they
also
have many different cultural beliefs.
For example
,
a
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nude
painitings
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paintings
painting
of
a
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men
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man
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or
a
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women
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woman
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can be displayed as a form of
art
in these countries as
this
is considered
as
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pornographic and can have
negative
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impact on children's
brain
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.
Thus
, governments of these countries define what can be considered
as
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art
and what not.
Therefore
,
this
lead
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to
rebellious
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mindset in youngsters.
Lastly
, in my opinion, it is wrong to put boundaries
to
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a creative mindset but to have a social-bodies
to
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check the created piece of
art
and validate
before
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it is published to
whole
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world
.
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