artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity.some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.ato what extent do you agree or disagree?
Art
helps an individual to express his feelings, thoughts and ideas. Whereas some artists
around the globe have not given
the appropriate Add a missing verb
been given
freedom
to express themselves. This
blocking of freedom
hampers the whole ideology of art
and the true meaning behind it and I completely disagree with it.
Countries like France, Italy and Spain who has large
history of revolutions and wars. And to depict these iconic battles they had Add an article
a large
artists
who expressed themselves freely and shared the war stories with rest
of the Correct article usage
the rest
world
. Artists
living in Europe has
more Change the verb form
have
freedom
as they don't think that no art
form is bad or questionable. Various kind
of music, dance and festivals are Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
Add an article
the outcome
an outcome
outcome
of Change the noun form
outcomes
this
freedom
allocated to artists
which has
not only gained active audience but Change the verb form
have
also
renowned recognition around the globe. For example
, Mona
Lisa painting which was painted during Correct article usage
the Mona
World
War 2 is preserved by French
government and has been Add an article
the French
a
one of the famous tourist attractions of the city Change the article
apply
Paris
. Change preposition
of Paris
Furthermore
, the Taj Mahal of India,
depicts the historic time Remove the comma
apply
where
the Mughals ruled India. These all monuments and images are seen by the Correct word choice
when
world
because of the free creative space given to artists
.
Today, it is hard for people to express their art
form due to political and social dilemma
. They can't express what they want as they might hurt some or the other society or culture. Asian continents contribute a lot to Fix the agreement mistake
dilemmas
total
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the total
world
population and they also
have many different cultural beliefs. For example
, a
nude Correct article usage
apply
painitings
of Correct your spelling
paintings
painting
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
men
or Fix the agreement mistake
man
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
women
can be displayed as a form of Fix the agreement mistake
woman
art
in these countries as this
is considered as
pornographic and can have Change preposition
apply
negative
impact on children's Add an article
a negative
brain
. Fix the agreement mistake
brains
Thus
, governments of these countries define what can be considered as
Change preposition
apply
art
and what not. Therefore
, this
lead
to Change the verb form
leads
rebellious
mindset in youngsters.
Correct article usage
a rebellious
Lastly
, in my opinion, it is wrong to put boundaries to
a creative mindset but to have a social-bodies Change preposition
on
to
check the created piece of Fix the infinitive
apply
art
and validate before
it is published to Correct pronoun usage
it before
whole
Change the article
the whole
world
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