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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

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Those who show their talent in public are called celebrities,they create and sell their product like songs movies
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 sports man
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 earn money.In other,word celebrities call businessmen they can earn money easily more than politicians,because politics is not a business these are free services,by the
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 for the
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 and to the
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.In my ,opinion
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 is a good signal for a country where politicians do their jobs well without any corruption and give free services to
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.On
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 , a topic I strongly support
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 statement.Celebrities are able to earn more money by selling their skills if
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 like their performance and start to follow them
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 they start income unlimited.On the other ,hand politicians should always think about how to save and survive and take the right way to their nation, the development of the country creates a chance for quality of
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 for the public. We can find those
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 who are college dropped out after leaving their
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 they achieve their goals
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 those who complete their
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, unfortunately, do not get
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 in their
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.In my ,opinion
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 statement is only some
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's illusion not reality,very fewer one or two out of thousands are able to receive
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 kind of achievement.In
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 essay,I will discuss both views and try to give a clear way to whom get
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 in our
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. The main reason is to get real
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 behind two very important factors we found one of these is smart
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 with full focus right direction,
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 person who is unable to gate their university
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,they have only one option do or die that's why they fully focused to their future task.After regular and honestly working on their own idea they get
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.
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,having good luck when they are born.In my personal experience who gat
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 without getting hard to
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 is called good luck.Those
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 who
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 are always serious about their future and clear vision of their goals doing hard for achieving a bright future god always supports them.
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,who complete their
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 stell gating unsuccess,on
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 , a statement I strongly believe that those students are going to searching a good job for a living.Doing a job is unable to make wealth,
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 making wealth is a kind of art, and
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 art was not taught in college.Well-educated students are always searching for an easy way to live,they do not want to take risks in their
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. In conclusion,I strongly believe getting
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 is not by schooling learning in school and colleges.Achieve
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 comes by continuously hard
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 in the right direction until they are at the top.Good luck is
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 a factor to get
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 but it is not to get results without doing anything and by sitting.
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