Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?
Those who show their talent in public are called celebrities,they create and sell their product like songs movies
also
sports man then
earn money.In other,word celebrities call businessmen they can earn money easily more than politicians,because politics is not a business these are free services,by the people
for the people
and to the people
.In my ,opinion this
is a good signal for a country where politicians do their jobs well without any corruption and give free services to people
.On this
, a topic I strongly support this
statement.Celebrities are able to earn more money by selling their skills if people
like their performance and start to follow them then
they start income unlimited.On the other ,hand politicians should always think about how to save and survive and take the right way to their nation, the development of the country creates a chance for quality of life
for the public.
We can find those people
who are college dropped out after leaving their education
they achieve their goals on the other hand
those who complete their education
, unfortunately, do not get success
in their life
.In my ,opinion this
statement is only some people
's illusion not reality,very fewer one or two out of thousands are able to receive this
kind of achievement.In this
essay,I will discuss both views and try to give a clear way to whom get success
in our life
.
The main reason is to get real success
behind two very important factors we found one of these is smart work
with full focus right direction, this
person who is unable to gate their university education
,they have only one option do or die that's why they fully focused to their future task.After regular and honestly working on their own idea they get success
.Secondly
,having good luck when they are born.In my personal experience who gat success
without getting hard to work
is called good luck.Those people
who work
are always serious about their future and clear vision of their goals doing hard for achieving a bright future god always supports them.
On the other hand
,who complete their education
stell gating unsuccess,on this
, a statement I strongly believe that those students are going to searching a good job for a living.Doing a job is unable to make wealth,however
making wealth is a kind of art, and this
art was not taught in college.Well-educated students are always searching for an easy way to live,they do not want to take risks in their life
.
In conclusion,I strongly believe getting success
is not by schooling learning in school and colleges.Achieve success
comes by continuously hard work
in the right direction until they are at the top.Good luck is also
a factor to get success
but it is not to get results without doing anything and by sitting.Submitted by bhattaraikeshav2014 on
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