54.Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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have different views about whether helping a global aid organisation only keeps the focus on problems or makes them unnecessary.

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there are some downsides to mitigating the

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with the support of well-known

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, I believe

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approach will help society as a whole. There are a number of reasons why supporting

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famous

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the

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more

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. One possible reason is that the big names have more power and influence in the society.

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, the community is more likely to give donations when they are called to

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action by their favourite actors, singers or players.

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,

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tend to participate in any kind of social

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where

celebraties

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celebrities

are likely to

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or

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.

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, the government organize a tree plantation program every year all over the country

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Bangladesh before the rainy season where a large number of

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are participated

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enthusiastically as many famous

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are involved in

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program. Despite the above arguments, it cannot be denied that

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involvement would make the main issue less significant.

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, more publishing attention may focus on

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person's personal issues and draw consideration away from the

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itself.

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, in

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contemporary society, a group of

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individuals

or companies arrange a lot of so-called charity

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by

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involving

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for the

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of their own interest rather than solving the problems.

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, some foreign company tends to involve the local famous

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owing

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to resolve the

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in Bangladesh.

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main focus of these companies

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publish

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their name in the media with less investment as electronic and social media always

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the presence of the

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. In conclusion,

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the involvement of well-known

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make

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the

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less emergent with some apparent drawbacks, I would argue that for the purposes of

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global attention

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major issues, the engagement of

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celebrity

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is more considerable.