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In the future, no body will buy printed newspapers or books becase they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement

#future #body #newspapers #books
For centuries
books
 and
Newspapers
has
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 played a major role in
people
's lives. From great Scientists to Philanthropists they all have
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referred
refferred
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referred
books
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 to make the world a greater place.
Newspapers
on the other hand
 have been a part of
daily
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the daily
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routing
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routine
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 of communities as a mode of communication for
transfer
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the transfer
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 of News and other related interested topics.
The printed
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 material
have
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 been the most used way of reading
books
 and
Newspapers
 until
recent
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 past.
People
 are more likely to read
books
 on printed papers
more
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than
reading
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 them online. It gives them
sense
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 of
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 rather than looking
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screen with your eyes doomed at it.
Online
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platform
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platforms
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 became
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aggressively
aggressive
aggresively
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aggressively
 famous
since
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 2019 due to Covid 19 pandemic. Children who
has
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 been learning from
books
 from the day we knew had to move to
online
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 platform as health was a huge concern, Due to that reason
people
 who used to read
books
 and
News papers
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also
 moved to read online.
However
, after
pandemic
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lightend
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lightened
lighten
 up a little bit
people
 who were
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interested
inetereted
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interested
 in reading materials moved back to
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their
thier
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their
 routine physical reading material. while
majority
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 and some never returned back to physical material we cannot deny that some are still interested in reading
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their
old fashioned
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 physical
books
 and
Newspapers
.One of the best
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for
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 that was
also
 given in the recent past. The bookfair 2023 was no lesser crowd than other years proving that no matter how risky that could be,even to risk your health,
peoples
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people's
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 love for physical
books
 are still so much alive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital media
  • accessible
  • advancements
  • user-friendly
  • environmental impact
  • reducing paper consumption
  • digital reading devices
  • economic implications
  • monetization models
  • demographics
  • collectibility
  • ease of annotation
  • reduced screen time
  • negative impacts
  • literacy
  • reading habits
  • promoting access
  • cultural significance
  • historical significance
  • transition
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